three early works
While cleaning my family’s place in Chula Vista, my brother stumbled upon a few writing assignments from when I was in first and second grade.
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Rain
The rain is raining all around,
It falls on feild and tree,
It rains on the umbrellas hear,
And on ships at sea.
[January 30, 1981. Second grade. A literal drawing of the poem is rendered on the back in crayon and pencil on construction paper]
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Untitled
I will plant a garden this summer. It will have a lot of vegetables. It will also have a lot of worms.
[c. 1979. First grade]
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Untitled (short story)
One day, it rained cats and dogs– real cats and real dogs! That day, it was sunny. When I went outside to play, but then… the cats and dogs came! I caught A dog and took it home with me. I named the dog rufus.
[January 29, 1980. First grade]
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What we’ve learned: I am a born Dadaist, am naturally inclined to write poetry which features careful use of rhyme and meter, and have always misused ellipses. Plus ça change, plus c’est la même chose.
September 1st, 2009 at 11:52 am
What I want, you’ve got
But it might be hard to handle
Like the flame that burns the candle
The candle feeds the flame yeah yeah