three early works

While cleaning my family’s place in Chula Vista, my brother stumbled upon a few writing assignments from when I was in first and second grade.

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Rain

The rain is raining all around,
It falls on feild and tree,
It rains on the umbrellas hear,
And on ships at sea.

[January 30, 1981. Second grade. A literal drawing of the poem is rendered on the back in crayon and pencil on construction paper]

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Untitled

I will plant a garden this summer. It will have a lot of vegetables. It will also have a lot of worms.

[c. 1979. First grade]

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Untitled (short story)

One day, it rained cats and dogs– real cats and real dogs! That day, it was sunny. When I went outside to play, but then… the cats and dogs came! I caught A dog and took it home with me. I named the dog rufus.

[January 29, 1980. First grade]

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What we’ve learned: I am a born Dadaist, am naturally inclined to write poetry which features careful use of rhyme and meter, and have always misused ellipses. Plus ça change, plus c’est la même chose.

One Response to “three early works”

  1. Misty Dawn Says:

    What I want, you’ve got
    But it might be hard to handle
    Like the flame that burns the candle
    The candle feeds the flame yeah yeah

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